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\subsection{Gender neutrality}
When possible,you should use sentence strctures that do not require 3rd person,singular pronouns.
When possible,you should use sentence strutures that do not require 3rd person,singular pronouns.
The most common way to do this is to use plural forms.
\begin{itemize}
\item Unacceptable: \sout{When a userposts contenton his blog or website,he effectively becomesa
\item Unacceptable: \sout{When a user posts content on his blog or website,he effectively becomes a
"broadcaster. "}
\item Acceptable: When users post content on their blogs or websites, they effectively become "broadcasters."
\end{itemize}
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\subsection{passive voice}
You can often eliminate a passive construction simply by rearranging the existing elements in the
sentence.
\begin{itemize}
\item Unacceptable: \sout{Female customers are targeted by this advertisement.}
\item Acceptable: This advertisement targets female customers.
\end{itemize}