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\subsection{Gender neutrality}
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When possible,you should use sentence strctures that do not require 3rd person,singular pronouns.
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When possible,you should use sentence strutures that do not require 3rd person,singular pronouns.
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The most common way to do this is to use plural forms.
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\begin{itemize}
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\item Unacceptable: \sout{When a userposts contenton his blog or website,he effectively becomesa
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\item Unacceptable: \sout{When a user posts content on his blog or website,he effectively becomes a
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"broadcaster. "}
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\item Acceptable: When users post content on their blogs or websites, they effectively become "broadcasters."
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\end{itemize}
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\subsection{passive voice}
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You can often eliminate a passive construction simply by rearranging the existing elements in the
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sentence.
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\begin{itemize}
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\item Unacceptable: \sout{Female customers are targeted by this advertisement.}
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\item Acceptable: This advertisement targets female customers.
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\end{itemize}
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